I’ve just reviewed another handful of YC applications, here’s a few more themes that stood out.
1/ Your traction is your story
A lot of traction statements feel like an after thought. List of stale bullet points, no story. This is your main story - own it.
In the past X time we’ve done {insert list of amazing things}. We’ve seen customers {insert proof it works} and even {insert amazing customer validation}. We got so many users we couldn’t invited them fast enough.
It should read like a founders who capturing wins left and right.
Force a double take.
2/ Traction != Action
Too many traction statements are filled with action, not traction.
Action is something you did but contains no actual win or proof point. Building something (unless it’s impressive), talking to people, joining some group.
These aren’t proof points your company will take off, these are a regurgitation of your todo list.
Traction is external - users, customers, revenue, feedback, LOIs, waitlists.
These are things earned, not simply done. They convey proof you’re onto something.
3/ Faster please
Worth stating again. Big traction, small amount of time. Your last 3 weeks should be so incredibly impactful that it’s a mistake to not interview you.
4/ The more words, the less impressive
Stop over explaining. Stop adding. Start filtering.
Decide on your top 5 “gold dust” points. Your strongest, most impressive parts of your or your business.
Let those shine through.
Too many founders are over explaining, thinking that the more context I have the more impressed I’ll be.
It couldn’t be the opposite.
The more you talk, the more I know you struggle to communicate your business simply and easily. It’s usually a factor of not prioritizing your gold dust and trying to say everything.
You’ll struggle to get folks bought into your vision, you’ll struggle to raise, and your mom probably doesn’t know what your company does.
None of which are great signs in a founder.
This past week I’ve received dozens of DMs asking for YC application reviews. There’s a clear pattern between great applications and bad ones.
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Good applications use simple language.
Bad applications use buzzwords.
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Good applications are easy to read.
Bad applications are very dense.
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Good applications have impressive traction.
Bad applications have little to none.
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Good applications make their product sound simple.
Bad applications make their product sound complex.